支招小作文(199) I 地图 一个图书馆布局变化
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The书馆 maps below show the ground floor of a library in 2001 and 2005.
【主体段分段】:
一图一段
开头段
The maps compare the layout of the first floor of a library as it was in 1995 and 2005.
概述段
It is clear thatthis libraryhad witnessed significant changesin the given period.Especially, sections for reference books had been removed,butareas designed for self-studyhad been newly constructed.
思路要点:
- 这个图书馆变化显著
- 陈列reference books的区域消失,新增self-study区域
Body paragraph 1
Looking at the information in more detail,布局变化 we can seeIn 1995, there was an entranceon the southern side. Two groups of chairsoccupied the center ofthe library,withsome books for display locatednearby.On the northern side ofthe library was a section specially designed for reference books and maps.Looking at the western side, we can find thatthere were some computers without Internet access and some local reference books,whilea librarian’s desk and photocopieswere sited on the eastern side of the library.
思路要点:1995年
- 南边有入口
- 在中央有2组椅子,附近有书
- 北边有 reference books and maps
- 图书馆西边有computers without Internet access和local reference books,支招东边是小作 librarian’s desk 和photocopies
Body paragraph 2
Subsequently, in 2005,there were remarkable changes tothis library.Althoughtheinitialentrance and photocopieshad remained unchanged, theoriginalarea for local reference bookshad disappeared. Theformerchairsin the centralareawere moved to the west,replacing the original site ofcomputers without access to the Internet.Likewise, self-service desks had emerged totake up the place oftheinitialdesk for librarians.Also,on the north of the library, theprevioussection for reference materialswas converted intoan area containing computers with Internet access.
思路要点:2005年
- entrance、photocopies不变
- local reference books消失
- 之前的地图chairs搬到西面,取代原来computers without access to the Internet的个图位置
- self-service desks新建,取代原来的书馆desk for librarians
- 北边的reference books and maps改建成了computers with Internet access
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