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- no reason stated和others都占比7%

[2024/ 3/ 2] The国移 line graph and pie charts below show the number of three groups of immigrants from 2000 to 2008 and the percentage of immigrants for different reasons in 2008.

【主体段分段】  ：按照图分段

Body 1：线图

Body 2 ：饼图

【开头段】

The line graph illustrates how long immigrants intended to stay in Britain between 2000 and 2008, and the pie chart compares different reasons for immigration for the year 2008.

【概述段】

It is clear thatamong all the three surveyed groups, more people chose to spend no more than 2 years in UK.Also, work and study were the primary reasons for migration to this country.

思路要点 ：

- 线图：up to 2 years的人数一直最高

- 饼图：work和study的占比较大

【Body 1】

According to the line chart, we can find thatoriginally, roughly 160,000 immigrants decided to stay in UK for up to 2 years.After a slight drop by10,000 in the subsequent year, this figuresoared to its peak at250,000 in 2004.The following 4 years witnesseda period of steadiness in this figure. The number of people choosing to stay in UK between 2 and 4 yearsfluctuated at around 50,000in the initial 5-year period,after which this figure nearly doubledin 2008.Besides,althoughno surveyed people opted for a stay of at least 4 years before 2001,we can see that150,000 people made such decision in 2001 and this figureremained constantuntil the end of the given period.

思路要点：线图

- 橙色：第一年160,000→2001年小幅度下降→2004年急剧上升到峰值→到2008年平稳

- 灰色：2000~2005年波动在大约50,000→到2008年上涨2倍数

- 蓝色
：2001年前无数据→2001年数据为150,000→直到2008年平稳

【Body 2】

In terms offactors that attracted people to reside in UK,it is obvious thatwork was considered by 38% of the surveyed people.Also, 32% of the immigrants chose to live in this country for study,andthis figurewas twice as large asthe percentage of people moving to this country for family reasons.Furthermore,both people migrating to UK for unclear and other reasons accounted for 7% respectively.

思路要点：饼图

- work数据为38%

- study数据为32% ，