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The去电 graph below shows the percentage of people by age group visiting the cinema at least once per month in one particular country between 1978 and 2008.

【主体段分段】：

Body 1：15-24(始终最高)、35 and over(始终最低)

Body 2：其余2个年龄组

【开头段】

The影院 line chart illustrates changes in cinema attendance among 4 age groups who went to the cinema at least once a month in a specific country from 2000 to 2011.

【概述段】

It is clear thatthe theater attendanceexperienced an upward trendfor all the age groups, and the 15-to-24-year-olds remained to bethe dominant group of audiencethroughout the given period.

思路要点：

- 四个年龄段数据都上升

- 15-24的数据一直最高

【Body 1】

Looking at the information in more detail, we can find that15% of people aged 15-24 went to the cinema monthly in the initial year.Aftera remarkable rise toover 30% in 2004, this figurefluctuatedbetween35%and52% for several years,peaking at58% in 2009.By contrast,the oldest group(35 and over) had the lowest cinema attendance in the 11 years,growing steadilyfrom roughly 2% in 2000 to 12% in 2011.

思路要点：

- <25-24>：2000年15%→到2004年显著上升到30%→随后在35%-52%之间波动→2009年达到峰值58%

- <25 and over>：始终最低，2%逐步上升到12%

【Body 2】

Similar trends could be found in the figures for the other two groups of people. The比例 proportion of the cinema goers aged 7-14surgedfrom 10% to roughly 38% in the beginning decade,followed by a significant decline to30% in the final year.However, only 5% of the 25-to-35-year-old people claimed to visit the cinema every month.Subsequently, this figureunderwent some flucturationsandincreasedby almost 7-fold tothe highest pointin 2009.Aftera dramatica fall, it finally rose tothe same figureas the attendance from the youngest group in 2011.

思路要点：

-<7-14>：2000-2010急剧上升到38%→2011年显著下降到30%

-<25-35>：2000年5%→随后波动，到2009年几乎上升7倍达到最大值→急剧下降→2011年上升，支招和7-14交点

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